Olivia Riley-S
September 6, 2018
As a Post Malone enthusiast, Claire
had a hard time picking a favorite piece of his work, “I just love them all,”
she stated, but after a minute of contemplating she was able to narrow it down
to not one, but two favorites. The lucky songs that made her cut were
“Paranoid” and “Too Young”. Post’s mesmerizing voice and emotional lyrics is
what draws Claire to his pieces, and he is her musical go-to.
Her interests don’t stop at
listening to ‘Posty’, Claire also enjoys the ever-changing world of fashion.
Without a particular style, she’s down to ride the bandwagon and follow
whatever trends are in style at the moment, just as long as they are “comfy”
and “look good”. This way she doesn’t feel uncomfortable and allows her to feel
more confident in what she wears.
Not just any store will do, Claire prefers
the stores Forever 21, Tilly’s, and Pacsun, which are known for carrying
clothes and other items that fit into the trendy category. I had heard of Forever
21, and I’m sure so have others, but Pacsun and Tilly’s were new to me. A solid
explanation for this would be that neither of the stores are located in Iowa,
resulting in a majority of Claire’s shopping being done online, a process that
she doesn’t seem to mind.
You had very good transitions and a very good opening:)
ReplyDeleteThis is very well written and I am now an official fan of your work. But I will say reading your article was a bit difficult because of the font. But this was great!
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ReplyDeleteI really like the way you've written this piece as well. You seem to have a true talent in writing. I liked reading this the things Claire was interested in drew me in. There are so many people interested in fashion and Post Malone's music myself being one of them. I feel like this was relatable in a way. I am agreeing with Areigna though, the font was a bit weird to read for the first time. haha. I really enjoy your writing. This piece was great!
ReplyDeleteI like this profile i feel as though even though i was in a group with her i was able to get to know her a lot better.
ReplyDeleteThis article is well written, you provide a lot of detail for the portions you focused on and you flowed it pretty well. The font is a bit hard to read though.
ReplyDeleteVery nice transition through out the whole story. I got to know more about Claire by reading this article. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI loved the wording in this! The way it was all put together I really enjoyed. The whole story had a nice flow and went together very well.
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a good job with and really gave me a snapshot into Claire's life. I also thought that the thing flowed together well, and was fun to read.
ReplyDeleteThis article explains her interest well, but I suggest you opening it up a little differently. Good Job! 😊
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